Ooh, yes, I really like this one too. Much better than the one with the dock. But I also agree that the ribbon color is wrong. Maybe play with different colors for the ribbon and see if something else looks better.
I suggest: Take the C@ sun, palm trees and brown banner and move it to the far left. Remove the banner, and then, take the sign over by the lounge chairs, that says "Cruise News and Community" and move it over underneath the C@ sun...and above the word Cruise...adding in Cruise @ddicts. JMO